Repost of Bluberry Skies
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This is a repost. Its my first try on short stories. Enjoy
"RRRRIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGG"
The alarm clock sounded vehemently despite putting it on snooze again.
"Damn! I am late yet again!"
Hurriedly, i took a quick shower and put on the clothes still on the laundry basket.Breakfast has been set and everyone appeared to have left the house.I hurriedly rushed to the carpark.
"What! No car again?How am i going to reach school for crying out loud?"
I took no chances and rushed to the bus stop hoping,praying and wishing that my bus would come soon.I thought i saw Dad in the car but i was too nervous to be having doubts.
My bus came and 2 hours later, i found myself sitting at the back of Accounting class half an hour late.
"Why am i the only late person here? Please let there be another latecomer"
True enough, someone knocked and the door creaked open. Under the shower of the sunlight rays, basked in the glow of her radiance, stood a girl beautiful enough to carry me off to Neverland.
The teacher,stunned yet surprised, introduced to us the new student she has been talking about the past week.
"Je mÂ’appelle Isabelle", she muttered in fluent French. (my name is Isabelle)
"You can take a seat beside Andy here.You don't mind, do you?", the teacher snided to me with a wry smile.
"I'll be glad too
", i replied with eagerness.
Her face was flawless with complexion of clay with stardust. Tall, slender yet maintained her elegant poise. I was too awed to be concentrating right now.
A million glances and an hour later, the class ended and i learnt nothing once again but the meaning of beauty.
My friends were busy asking me where to go to lunch but Isabelle just stood there, obviously clueless what she was supposed to do.
"Aimeriez-vous aller au déjeuner avec nous?" i asked her. (Would you like to go to lunch with us?)
She was obviously stunned that i spoke in her tongue but she cooly replied.
"Non remercie. Mon papa me choisit en haut"(No thanks. My dad is picking me up)
"Prendre le Soin et vous Voit" i told her with a wink in my eye. (Take care and see you)
As i entered the lift lobby, the sound of a car braking filled me. It must be her dad. -
*CLAP* *CLAP*
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Originally posted by lilogirl:*CLAP* *CLAP*
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wooohooo french.. the language of LURVE....~~
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Originally posted by jOhO:wooohooo french.. the language of LURVE....~~ I hope its ok
I have lots to learn from you!!!!!!! -
I've only two comments....
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me no understand french... u dun put in translation... how would we noe wat they toking abt?!?!?!
2 my alarm clock go RIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIING!!!! not ding-ding-ding.. -
points takenOriginally posted by lilogirl:I've only two comments....
1 me no understand french... u dun put in translation... how would we noe wat they toking abt?!?!?!
2 my alarm clock go RIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIING!!!! not ding-ding-ding.. -
of cos it's ok! i'll be waiting for many many more parts.. isabelle hmm.. is a belle? ehehehOriginally posted by Master -_-: I hope its ok
I have lots to learn from you!!!!!!!
alamak dun say until like that, we all have heaps to learn from each other. one of the purposes of gathering all writers in one forum -
its a story with twists and conniving plotsOriginally posted by jOhO:of cos it's ok! i'll be waiting for many many more parts.. isabelle hmm.. is a belle? eheheh
alamak dun say until like that, we all have heaps to learn from each other. one of the purposes of gathering all writers in one forum
i think about 10 more posts ah...i must learn from u wat BRAther.. ur my ou xiang.. -
really ar? okok i recommend this plastic surgeon to you.. and now they have LATEX implants.. for a more natural feel over thier silicon counterparts.Originally posted by Master -_-:its a story with twists and conniving plots
i think about 10 more posts ah...i must learn from u wat BRAther.. ur my ou xiang..
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Originally posted by jOhO:really ar? okok i recommend this plastic surgeon to you.. and now they have LATEX implants.. for a more natural feel over thier silicon counterparts.
Next part of story during lunch time.. -
i'm havin an early lunch!!!Originally posted by Master -_-:
Next part of story during lunch time.. -
limelight disappeared liow ar?
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The rest of the day with Isabelle went fine. Talked briefly about her life in France and her transition to Singapore. Little did i know that she owned a vineyard there.That struck a chord but i couldn't place where.A day with a beautiful girl like her makes me look forward to come to school early.
Thinking of sending her home, i called up my dad and asked whether he will be picking me up later from work.
"Dad, will you be picking me up from school? My friend may need a lift home", i asked excitedly.
"Sorry son, i have an important appointment later from work. Where are you schooling again, Son?",he answered.
"Uhhh its ok, Dad", i replied dejectedly.
I was dejected.We hardly talked at home and he has his own life and i have mine.
"Je suis désolé mais mon papa est un petit morceau occupé", i told her sadly (I'm sorry but my dad is a little bit busy)
"C'est bon.Je peux parler anglais un morceau à propos", she told me. (its ok. I can speak english a little bit by the way)
"Oh ok then. I see you tomorrow"
The whole evening, i was fidgety. I kept thinking about her and had feelings of missing her. I told myself whether she is my dream girl or not. Everywhere i looked lay a figment or a mirage of her face.
That evening, during dinner as usual, having dinner with my dad and brother. I cropped something up at the dinner table.
"Guys, I just met the most beautiful person in the whole world", i swooned.
"She spoke the language of love and i think i...", i wanted to continue but..
"Young man, don't you think you are too young to fall in love. Besides, i also saw the most beautiful girl in the world too", he interrupted.
"Again?", my brother and i remarked in unison.
Ever since, our mother passed away, we have grown accustomed to our dad's philandering ways but he has yet to remarry.
After dinner, we proceed to our own activities. My brother was busy chatting with his girl online. Dad went out to meet someone while here i am lying on my bed thinking of someone.
A few hours later, the phone rang.
"Hello?", i asked.
"Andy, i won't be coming home tonight but please remind your brother that i have reserved a table at the same restaurant for an important dinner and announcement", my dad told me.
"No problem at all", i replied.
Even while sleeping, i kept dreaming about her.
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woohoo part two...
i remember your very "fatherly" dad ahahah.. can't even remember where u schooling.
btw i think got a couple of typos. wanna check thru again? -
thanks.. i had no time to proof read.. so does the plot thickens or is the story predictable? i need criticisms..Originally posted by jOhO:woohoo part two...
i remember your very "fatherly" dad ahahah.. can't even remember where u schooling.
btw i think got a couple of typos. wanna check thru again? -
well depends on the style. this seems like a more casual kind of "script" where you mainly focus on what the characters say, and a little on how they feel. not much attention paid to scene or setting or building of character (describing their personality).Originally posted by Master -_-:thanks.. i had no time to proof read.. so does the plot thickens or is the story predictable? i need criticisms..
the fast moving pace, if intended, is great, makes for a light and easy read.
as for language, simple and easy to understand, but i could pick up a few quirks.. like "Uhhh its ok, Dad", i replied dejectedly. Then,I was dejected.. is abit superfluous. Maybe try using another adjective?
wat else ah? think for now that's it. hope u don't mind. -
wOoOhooOooooOooOooooO!
/me whistle... MAster WEE-U-WEE!
Now alot of story! Wo xi huan! -
okay thanksOriginally posted by jOhO:well depends on the style. this seems like a more casual kind of "script" where you mainly focus on what the characters say, and a little on how they feel. not much attention paid to scene or setting or building of character (describing their personality).
the fast moving pace, if intended, is great, makes for a light and easy read.
as for language, simple and easy to understand, but i could pick up a few quirks.. like "Uhhh its ok, Dad", i replied dejectedly. Then,I was dejected.. is abit superfluous. Maybe try using another adjective?
wat else ah? think for now that's it. hope u don't mind. -
Originally posted by Yunhaier:wOoOhooOooooOooOooooO!
/me whistle... MAster WEE-U-WEE!
Now alot of story! Wo xi huan! With cover pic some more -
i'm waiting for you to post you GOOD STUFF!!!Originally posted by Yunhaier:wOoOhooOooooOooOooooO!
/me whistle... MAster WEE-U-WEE!
Now alot of story! Wo xi huan! -
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WAH LAU EH!
PRO LAH! -
I made sure i woke up early and be on time today. My hair is combed and gelled up and i arrived early for class hoping to be the first to greet the belle of the class.
Surprisingly, my dad had left early for work today and took the car with him, leaving me no choice but to take the bus for 2 consecutive days.
Being half an hour early before a morning class may prove to be a costly mistake because no one would like to bask under the hot morning sun and beaded droplets of sweat cascading your face.
Still, i persisted to meet her first.
Seconds ticked by and the heat became intolerable, i decided to take a cool cup of Coke to quench my thirst and cool down my body.
"Ker-plunk. 10 cents. Ker-plunk. 20 cents. Ker-plunk. 30 cents."
"Damn! I am short of 10 cents,"i muttered silently as i search both the pockets of my jeans.
"Ker-plunk.Swoooooooosssshhhh"
"There you go.10 cents"
A familiar voice protruded heavenly to my tender eardrums as i was still searching for the much-needed 10 cents.
I turned around and there she was. The goddess of my love. The guardian of my dreams. The ink in my printer. The blood in my veins.It was Isabelle.
"Errr. Thanks. You just arrived?" i asked trying to mask the embarrasment earlier.
"Yeah. My dad sent me here before going to work. What about you?" she asked me temporary blinding me with the glow from her pearlies.
"My dad? Lets not talk about him. He doesn't care about my family. Hey! Thats the teacher. I think we better go in now" i answered rather emotionlessly."
It was fun having her as my classmate and new friend. We helped one another and even shared some secrets though we knew each other for only 2 days.
During lunch, i couldn't help but ask her if she had any plans tonight.
"Hey Isabelle. I'm just wondering whether you are free tonight? I kinda wanna ask you out for dinner", i asked after finally mustering enough courage.
"Sorry Andy. I have plans tonight with my family. Some other day perhaps", she replied.
"Its ok. Maybe you can treat me to dinner first. Haha.", i teased.
The whole day went great and alas, it was time for us to go our separate ways once again. I remembered about the dinner Dad had asked us to go and immediately called my brother so could meet him first before going to La Creatuix De Pignon at Shenton Way.
We arrived at the restaurant rather early as there were not many patrons yet. I asked the waiter for the reservations made by my dad and was shocked to see him requesting for a table of 5 despite having only 3 people in our family.
We were ushered to our seats and waited rather patiently for my dad and his guests to appear. Never did we expect playing arm wrestling in a posh restaurant would be a great idea and a great time killer.
"ANDY!!!"
I turned around and i had the shock of my life to see Isabelle here as well.
"Having dinner Isabelle?" i asked excitedly.
"Yup. With my family. What about you?"she answered.
"Yeah! With my family too", i told her.
"There comes my dad!", i remarked.
"There comes my dad!", Isabelle remarked.
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Originally posted by jOhO:of cos it's ok! i'll be waiting for many many more parts.. isabelle hmm.. is a belle? eheheh
alamak dun say until like that, we all have heaps to learn from each other. one of the purposes of gathering all writers in one forum Very good idea.
Then we can all brain storm for one good story. Woo hoo hoo