Story: A little walk in life
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so how freq u post the story?
Originally posted by Parka:
That's the best line in Installment 3. -
Originally posted by J-reeee:so how freq u post the story? Not very frequent. Writing and thinking needs a lot of time.
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i say!!!!Originally posted by Parka: Not very frequent. Writing and thinking needs a lot of time.
one thing about writing, esp this type, where u're trying to entertain ur readers (right?), when the writer writes his work, he has to "read" it as how his readers would, and how they'd think and feel. it's hard becos the readers are reading it for the first time, whereas the writer has it all in his head. erm.. dunno if u get wat i mean?
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Yeah, that was good!Originally posted by jOhO:FWAAHAHAHAHAHAhahahahahhahahahhahahahhaha...
i particularly liked the lipstick and the ahbeng..
btw, can u intro me to the narrator's grandma?
it's really good btw. period. -
Originally posted by jOhO:i say!!!!
one thing about writing, esp this type, where u're trying to entertain ur readers (right?), when the writer writes his work, he has to "read" it as how his readers would, and how they'd think and feel. it's hard becos the readers are reading it for the first time, whereas the writer has it all in his head. erm.. dunno if u get wat i mean? Uh huh. A bit. Wait till I get some flame on me then I try to improve further. 
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I like this story.
BTH.. keep laughing when i read the stories.. hahaha!
Really cheer up my day sia!
Thou my first cheer of the day was... I think I can pass my test today! " -
oh yes!! i got ur msg.. aiyah must've forgotten to reply... was distracted by something.Originally posted by edLow:I like this story.
BTH.. keep laughing when i read the stories.. hahaha!
Really cheer up my day sia!
Thou my first cheer of the day was... I think I can pass my test today! "
i like parka's humour. just as well - he's a cartoonist as well!
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hahah. donno lah... aiya. just take things easy and take every step while look at it lor. Worry so much also useless... I did my part already. Left the other party to decide.Originally posted by jOhO:oh yes!! i got ur msg.. aiyah must've forgotten to reply... was distracted by something.
i like parka's humour. just as well - he's a cartoonist as well! -
glad u're feeling a little better today..Originally posted by edLow:hahah. donno lah... aiya. just take things easy and take every step while look at it lor. Worry so much also useless... I did my part already. Left the other party to decide. -
used to it liao! Had been worse before. End up as a tool to spite my frd. N tat was a few day before my bd last yr. tamade.. really damn sad tat time sia...Originally posted by jOhO:glad u're feeling a little better today.. -
Installment 4. Narration in blue icq conversation in black.
Oh oh.
The sound came out from the speakers. ThereÂ’s a new icq message, and itÂ’s from Lisa.
`Lisa`
Hello. I had a really great day yesterday.
~darksh[/i]it~
Me too. I didnÂ’t realize that French movies are watchable. Haha.
`Lisa`
Your nick looks crude.
~darksh[/i]it~
Haha. ItÂ’s to ward off bad luck.
`Lisa`
I didnÂ’t see your parents the last time I came to your house.
~darksh[/i]it~
IÂ’m only living with grandma. My parents died quite a long time ago. Heard from my grandma that they were killed by bananas.
Seems that girls like to prowl into this of kind things. Expected.
`Lisa`
IÂ’m sorry.
~darksh[/i]it~
Ah. YouÂ’re not the first one who asked me this. They were driving behind this truck carrying bananas when the tail board gave away. The bananas came roaring down and they lost control of their car.
`Lisa`
IÂ’m sorry.
~darksh[/i]it~
Why are you always apologizing?
`Lisa`
Is it? I didnÂ’t realize. Hee3.
~darksh[/i]it~
NevermindÂ…Â…What do you think of me?
That was classic. It has to be used everytime.
There was a long pause. This is bad. DidnÂ’t the plan work?
`Lisa`
YouÂ’re nice. Hee3.
Of course. Santos is always nice. This is a move forward.
~darksh[/i]it~
What do you think if we go out again?
`Lisa`
hee3. Okay.
WhatÂ’s with all these hee3? Young girls. Hee3.
~darksh[/i]it~
Alright. LetÂ’s see where we should goÂ….hmmmÂ…Â…
Well. Of course, the usual restaurants.
Ching. Ching. The sound of the keys came from the front door.
Someone’s coming back. Must be Santos. “Got to log off now before I get another scolding.” Grandma thought to herself.
~darksh[/i]it~
gtg. IÂ’ll call you when IÂ’ve an idea. Stomache. Wink. -
yeah, the lipstick part was a nice subtle touch.Originally posted by jOhO:FWAAHAHAHAHAHAhahahahahhahahahhahahahhaha...
i particularly liked the lipstick and the ahbeng..
btw, can u intro me to the narrator's grandma?
it's really good btw. period. -
wow... very imaginative!!
i LOLed at the WhatÂ’s with all these hee3? Young girls. Hee3
hey the grandma is getting a little far-fetched.. but i like her more!!!
nice twist even in such a short episode.. -
Originally posted by jOhO:wow... very imaginative!!
i LOLed at the WhatÂ’s with all these hee3? Young girls. Hee3
hey the grandma is getting a little far-fetched.. but i like her more!!!
nice twist even in such a short episode.. Far fetched...Yesh. But who cares??? -
Its getting predictable
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nice story~~~ Hee3, muahahahaha
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stretch it baby~~Originally posted by Parka: Far fetched...Yesh. But who cares??? 
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Wha the grandmother use ICQ one ah!!! pro..
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wah.. hahah very funny... u great writer... u story very funny.. n . ur grandma.. VERY KE AI.. wahahaha.... knows how to use icq.. buy tickets.. summore same cinema.. n romantic french comedy.. wahaha,... grandma is pro.. hehe...plus barbie dolls. n babies.. haha.. damn funny,,,
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PARKAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA~~
why no more??